IV. 改寫以下短文; 將下文中不需要的字詞刪除.並依需要將被動語態改成主動語態.且多用動詞(verb of action).必要時應合併前後句子.使下文更緊湊.更具活力
       In the modem city there is no safety for decent people. They are in a situation of continued exposure to crime. But it is my belief that a solution to this problem is attainable. The solution may sound strange, even crazy. New ideas often sound that way. Here is my proposal. Criminals and law-abiding city dwellers must switch places-literally. Criminals should be released from prison. They will live in the perilous freedom of our cities. They will become victims of their own robberies, muggings, and killings. Eventually self-destruction will result.

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Guan Yi Lin
Guan Yi Lin
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2018/10/23
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Vanilla
Vanilla
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2017/11/22
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